The cleaning in chap 13, if you are referring to the armor, is not mild cleaning (which the spell is designed for), but sunken in sweat and grime on the leather.Īs for the spaceship, the spell would clean and patch the walls, but not the circuitry as the circuitry wouldn't be considered a minor repair. So somehow no one thought of a safe zone newspaper with a letters column published on data pads? BTW shipping/train schedules were totally a historical part of coastal newspapers. Secondly you make a big issue out of communicating between safe zones, but you allow people to buy pads, put in content, and publish them to be bought at any kiosk on earth. Note this is a situation where you read something that is obviously an RPG element (d&d mending spell) and then proceed to waste time manually doing something when you got plenty of mana. Even worse the spell says one non magical object can be the target (does not specify clothing at all), so why no cleanse the cowcatcher on the train after the ogre instead of manualcleaning up the guts and cosmetic abuse? Why not cleanse the interior of the spaceship since the ship itself is also not magical but is now with a burnt interior and minor damage from the lightning bolt? Since Cleanse also does 'minor repairs to the object' this would be another obvious usage. In book 3 the protagonist gets the cleanse spell in chapter 13 and proceeds to ignore it for multiple gear cleanings. Hoping my writing motivation improves with the new books I'll be writing and they go more quickly.Just a comment and not a critical review. Sorry I haven't posted in a while, but much like a lot of other people, my RL is weird right now, motivation is difficult to come by. I'd call it a system apocalypse style, but I don't want to infringe on Tao Wong with that, so just Litrpg Apocalypse will do. It may be a standalone, but if I like it enough I have tentative plans that could stretch it into a three book series.Īfter that I've got plans for a Litrpg/Gamelit apocalypse style series.

Next on my writing agenda is another VR style Litrpg/Gamelit book. But the wait is over and #4 is done and will hopefully be published before the end of April.

It tends to make for a better story that way.

I'd intended to write this sooner, but when my brain refused to stay on it and insisted I write other things, I listened to it. It does still need proofing, editing, and the like so it won't be published for a few weeks still, but the story itself is finished.įor my Crow Hill readers, sorry for the delay. I just finished writing Crow Hill #4: Crystal Invasion.

Enter System by Tom Larcombe